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Posted on entry Better bad sentences ::: August 04, 2005, 12:26 PM:
My favorite Lyttle Lytton contest entry is the creator's first example, which I've quoted many times over the years: Jennifer stood there, quietly ovulating.

As to Mary Dell's desire ("I've always wished the Bulwer-Lytton awards were given for actual published first lines that were unintentionally bad"), the Guardian does something along these lines with its annual choice of the worst sexual passages from mainstream books: the Guardian's Bad Sex contest winning entries. When a friend originally sent me some of these, I thought they were Bulwer-Lytton entries!

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